Anna Graham

Thanks, you guys are the best!! You've pointed out some things that were bothering me, but I couldn't put my finger on them. I'm sure glad I posted this after ...

Chapter one 10/19/08 Dear diary, That’s so boring. Dear diary? I’m sure I can come up with something more creative than that. Or maybe I’m not that creative of a ...

Thanks! I'm really more of a free-style poet (as is plenty evident) so this information's great stuff! Thanks again for all your comments! --Anna

So instead of buying their Christmas presents this year, I'm going to give all my close friends this poem along with a list of 10 things I love about them. ...

Hello again! I've come for more! Before her brakes, Sam visited the seriously wounded she’d supervised on that first night. Do you mean "breaks"? It would make more sense to ...

Hello there, I decided to come check your stuff out! I like what I see so far; you've got some good descriptions, and the beginning is interesting enough to get ...

Well. That was a surprise. Jeez, I'm getting so caught up in the story, I can't concentrate on reviewing. :P I'd love to rant about how gross Mr. Sheldon is, ...

Hey there, Dreamworx! This is some great stuff! Let's see if I can find anything to fix... Well, it's a nitpick, but it'll do: “I have been running for my ...

Hey there, KJ! This is yet another brilliant addition to your story! I agree with the others, it was nice to have a chance to get comfortable in our chairs ...

Hey there, KJ! Once more, you've written an intense chapter. It makes me wonder... who reported Will? Was it a different female student, or Becca that he got in trouble ...

:D Hey again, KJ! I don't think I've mentioned this, but I like how you're alternating chapters between past and present. It's wicked knowing each story bit by bit. Again, ...

:D Ditto to what the others said. I'm veeery curious... *rubs chin thoughtfully* Oh, and here's a little thing: “Glad to here it,” I do believe she's hearing it, actually. ...

Well, it's a bit late now, but oh well. For my family, Thanksgiving is a time when we get to stuff 50+ people in my grandparents' condo and eat food, ...

Well, it's a bit late now, but oh well. For my family, Thanksgiving is a time when we get to stuff 50+ people in my grandparents' condo and eat food, ...

Hey again! She ignored me for so long that I wondered if she knew I was still here. I do believe you're missing "me" in that sentence. Bread, cheese, water, ...